Topic: The Effect of Using Mobile Phone Applications on Helping Children with Hearing Disabilities to Use English Language in the Cities of Jeddah and Taif in Saudi Arabia
Pages: 11, Double spaced
Order type: Editing
Academic level: Not specified
Language: English (U.K.)
In order to accept you as a PhD candidate you need to convince two potential supervisors and the HDR director that you are able to conduct your study. For this to succeed your proposal needs to be well structured, well researched and well written. At present there are problems with the structure, research and most of all the writing.
There are several grammatical mistakes in the proposal.
Also, your paragraphs need a topic sentence and a summary sentence and the content of each paragraph should only treat a single argument.
In your proposal you need to use the following structure:
Introduction, this is where you introduce the reader to the general problem and you state why money, effort and time should be spent on this research project. I.e. explain why it is important.
Then you need a literature review.
Here you present key literature that shows what has been done in the field to demonstrate that you are addressing a genuine gap in the body of knowledge.
Then you need a methodology section. This is where you present and contextualise your research questions and then you need to show how you use research instruments to gather data and also how you analyse the data to answer your research questions.
The research proposal then presents a timeline with dates.
The proposal concludes with a references section.
You do not need to include a personal statement.
Can you please work on this and then get back to me?
For your reference I have attached a research proposal (ignore the case study chapter).
I hope you will will be inspired by the example and I am looking forward to read a much-improved proposal next time
*** I will need additional 7 pages that needs to be written for my Literature Review and Methodology as asked by my professor